Well done for completing this aspect of your research. To strengthen: 1) Add illustrative graphics re costume, aspects of mise-en-scene. 2) Draw up a visual profile of your target audience, i.e. a girl, her costume, her accessories, where she shops etc. 3) What other media texts would appeal to your audience, think films similar to yours with females as central characters. What genre of music would appeal to your audience? What websites would the demographic frequently use and so on. 4) More references to your film production please.
Example: Why would your audience demographic use face book? Think about referencing real cases about stalkers or those who groom young girls on face book.
Too undeveloped. Lower Level 2 reflecting basic understanding and not clearly reflecting research.
Well done for completing this aspect of your research. To strengthen:
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2) Draw up a visual profile of your target audience, i.e. a girl, her costume, her accessories, where she shops etc.
3) What other media texts would appeal to your audience, think films similar to yours with females as central characters. What genre of music would appeal to your audience? What websites would the demographic frequently use and so on.
4) More references to your film production please.
Example: Why would your audience demographic use face book? Think about referencing real cases about stalkers or those who groom young girls on face book.
Too undeveloped. Lower Level 2 reflecting basic understanding and not clearly reflecting research.
Charlotte could you areas to strengthen, see my previous comment and reference documents I've given you. Any problems email me.
ReplyDeleteI would place your audience research at Level 3 at the moment. I assume you've responded to my feedback. Ms B
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