At the start of my thriller the tension is built up with the stare of the anxious eye, this image creates the loner image as it is not a glamorous eye, it is plain and ordinary. It suggests that the loner/stalker is threatening towards the other girl, even though the audience is not sure what is happening yet. In contrast, the first image we see of the other girl is when she is looking in the mirror, looking very glamorous and playing with her hair. This connotes how someone so glamorous really is childlike along with the shot of the girl with her rabbit. It suggests that she is naive and doesn't really know what is happening. This is also suggested when she accepts an invitation to the girls house, even when she clearly doesn't know her very well at all.

The audience can relate to these stereotypical characters and their emotions in the thriller. They know what it feels like because they experience a mixture of these emotions in their teenage years and can sometimes struggle with the effects of them, just like the girls in my thriller.
Good - you have clearly discussed the jealousy inherent in this age group of females. You have also looked at how this group define each other by appearance.
ReplyDeleteYou could have developed your comments on 'ordinary'. While you have mentioned the importance of school you could have looked at suburban, middle class setting further.